Haha

AHH! CHENGDAO'S TEACHER SOUNDS LIKE A PEDOBEAR! I must fix this...but after Envirothon meeting (which I studied for, yep, that's right, of course. .......)

Am done with first chapter; is not bad not bad if I do say so myself. Fact-checking probably needs be done, and I kinda changed ideas as to the time period of the first scene in the middle of writing it so...some tweaking should be done. I think it's a good first expose on Zhengbu and her influences though :D
(...and this is where I get it edited by someone else and find out it's crap. HA.)

Time for Chengdao's introduction. Am realizing that...of the parts from the first draft that I saved...er...a lot of it is repeats. As in, I'm going to just rewrite those things pretty much from scratch anyway. So...uh...haha...hahahahahaaaa (oh god)...here we go.

Currently at about 23,500 words, which, by NaNoWriMo standards, is utter FAIL. But hopefully the content has improved...